Participle dangling, and just his syntax loose
Wednesday, June 25, 2008
Tuesday, June 24, 2008
fellow knees
It was a good time to be alive and walking, as good as any time. It was somewhere before now and after before now. He'd started off early and was expecting to finish up or maybe get back late, or early, or at least later than he'd started. Nowhere had there been an unpleasantry or rough patch, if you didn't count all the cities though which he'd passed or all the areas in-between the cities. No time like the right time. He was trailing, now, behind the spot in front of him. His gaze had laid anchor down at his troubled shoes and his mind had been herded to the idea of either tying laces and bindling, or kicking off. A bishop made of key's horses passed by and he looked up.
"Summer: some time we sought it. Heaven's hands and help us if we bought it," dawdled the foldvest, not quite adressing him directly but, you know, addressing him.
"I was looking for an address in a place," he ventured, liming old lyrics from ago chats in the past cities from the weeks and other lengths before.
"Inside or at?"
"Inside, never mind. Say, you wouldn't happened to have an extra shoe or two, would you?"
"What was the address? Or, if it still is, what is it? I've no shoes."
"That's all right," he was dissapointed but forgot he was, "Gorilla and A Peach, Hammerdance...something, oh-two-oh-two. In the west. No, the east. In the east. To the east. East-er than here."
"I live there," hummed the bishop, "We'll go."
"But you were heading south."
"And now I'm heading east."
A hurt bank is better than a lost mile. He headed down after the bishop (who'd gotten about seven legs ahead of him), scared of the words you said. No tanks could take him, though, after the last miles.
Thursday, June 19, 2008
adjective noun
No cheerier a place in town could be found.
Making smiles from frowns, turning bad days around, its spirits will fly and your troubles will drown, so come down to the spot most renowned.
Dry-Ice Finnish croons with a grin, "Let your troubles be loose and unwound."
The mirrors on the walls reflect candle-crowns and the light is set abound.
The walls quiver, mirrors shake and the glow dances around the room that will soon come down.
Heels click and hips rub and they shake to the sound.
Their hands clap, their feet pound to a rhythm that makes the foundation unsound.
And sweat pours in drops as big as your head and heat stalks the place like a hound.
And while the whole crowd is clowning around, something moves, something shakes underground.
"Moonlight is sunlight and it's noon tonight, so in lunar rays let us be gowned. On this night, on this mound of ash-gray and mud-brown, to the Tea Room I welcome you now."
He cries, "Come crowd around here, deep downtown. Where the 'Tea' stands for 'Tonight' and the room spins 'round. Tonight we're all falling down."
So go put on your hat and a pair of dry clothes and come down, come down, come down.
Tuesday, June 10, 2008
head over-heals
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